Feedback on Impressions Script Version 0.1 (rough)
the feedback i received on my first draft of impressions was that the concept was interesting if you did it well but the whole thing needed more of a narrative to run through to make the whole thing more interesting and it also lacked a lot of sense to make it easy to follow or understand. i also needed to make the script formatted in a better way to make it readable. the formatting on a few of my titles were also wrong so i have changed them in the final version.
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