Wednesday, 22 October 2014

Rough cut link and feedback

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vRor_it7wYo&list=UUmmNUhUAHA1nkFRVk6Sf3ug

boop, there ya go ^-^ it's hardly done and i need to get some more things over half term to make it more...story like and it's kinda weird to watch, but there you go.


Peer Review Of Rough Cut

the general opinion of my film in its current state did not have enough story for it to be engaging throughout. also the sound was a real problem and the subtitles were sometimes distracting, the music was too loud at times and that made it distracting and the film lacked cuttaways. People also said the film lacked a real narrative and this made the film less engaging to the viewer.

Thursday, 16 October 2014

script overview just real quick.

intro by me about what the film is about.

-impressions shows on the screen in white text, black background-

question one

-cutaways of person-

answer from person one

-cutaways of cambridge-

answer from person two

-cutaways of cambridge-

answer from person three

-cutaways of cambridge-

-cutaways of the film crew moving around cambridge and setting up-

question two

-cutaways of cambridge-

answer from person one

-cutaways of cambridge-

answer from person two

-cutaways of cambridge-

answer from person three

-cutaways of peoples feet walking past sped up-

question three

-cambridge cutaway-

answer from person one

-cutaway-

answer from person two

-cutaway-

answer from person three

-cutaway-

question four

-cutaway-

answer one

-cutaway-

answer two

-cutaway-

answer three

-cutaway-

us saying goodbye to person one

us saying goodbye to person two

us saying goodbye to person three

-us leaving cambridge and getting on the bus, the 4th wall has been shattered and crushed to dust at this point-

outro done by me
what have we learned?


* in the case of some answers, music and cutaways will be changed to match the tone of the answer given, for example a silly answer.

** in the case of a really long answer, cutaways will be used while they speak

*** music will be sourced from incomptech.com by a musician called Kevin MacLeod, he does royalty free music and allows people to use his music as long as you credit him.


Wednesday, 15 October 2014

shooting list and Crew Calling!



Date: 18th October, Crew Needed: Adam Duffield

Role: Camera Man and Sound Recorder.


Date: 19th October, Crew Needed: Adam Duffield

Role: Camera Man and Sound Recorder.