Wednesday, 22 October 2014

Rough cut link and feedback

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vRor_it7wYo&list=UUmmNUhUAHA1nkFRVk6Sf3ug

boop, there ya go ^-^ it's hardly done and i need to get some more things over half term to make it more...story like and it's kinda weird to watch, but there you go.


Peer Review Of Rough Cut

the general opinion of my film in its current state did not have enough story for it to be engaging throughout. also the sound was a real problem and the subtitles were sometimes distracting, the music was too loud at times and that made it distracting and the film lacked cuttaways. People also said the film lacked a real narrative and this made the film less engaging to the viewer.

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